Analysis of One year life

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



I'm hesitant to say this
Because I know how much it pains
Your voice has blended in the wind
And its not been long since the stains

I'm hesitant to look for you
Because I know that you're not there
Just a replica of you
There wings fluffier than air

I'm hesitant because I heard your siren
And the cats were fighting in the yard
Crying on the morn
Screeching you were barred

I'm hesitant to grieve your life
That only lasts one year
As the winter lands its hand
Heavier than fear


Scheme XAXA BCBC XDXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1100111 01111111 11110001 01111101 11001111 01111111 1010011 1110011 11000111110 001010001 10101 10101 11001111 110111 1010111 10011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 484
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on September 17, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 17, 2022

Modified by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 17, 2022

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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