Analysis of The Untold Crush!



The Day I saw you First,
Was such a mesmerising Sight,
That blush, twinkles, so Bright,
Still caressing and swirling at heart.

You threw at me that tiny smile,
I went dizzy for a while,
Limbs jittery and fragile,
Heartbeats went so subtle..

Oh! My sweet Love!
Can I not be your beehive?
Under the cuddles of your heaves,
Sinking into the warm breath alive?


Scheme XAAX BBCC XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 011111 11011 111011 101001011 11111101 1110101 1100010 11110 1111 111111 1001111 100101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 360
Words 78
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

It's a love felt poem by a girl on her first crush at first sight.

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Written on November 01, 2022

Submitted by jaishreehallur333 on November 19, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jaishree Hallur

I am a professional electrical engineer, working for Ministry of Defence, India. I am an avid romantic writer both in kannada and English. more…

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