Analysis of Little Snow Angels



Sitting inside a dim-lit lodge that radiates the warmth of sunshine that these winter months are not accustomed to,

A sight of true beauty can be found just outside the forty-foot windows.

It is not the skier that has perfectly carved down the freshly powdered mountain.

It is not the snowboarder that landed a 360 turn.

It is not the couple holding hands on the ski lift as they take in the view of the summit.

It is not the friends laughing at their inexperienced friend who just ate snow for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.

Instead, it is a sight of beauty that we don’t see in our world anymore.

A sight that could spark joy in one's soul and jealousy in another’s.

A sight that makes you reflect on your past and simultaneously think about your future.

Oh to be nineteen in a ski lodge, looking out the window admiring a sight you thought you only see in the movies.

A father and child making little snow angels.

And suddenly you are no longer nineteen, you are five wondering if he will show up this time.

Looking out the window, you think of what you hope your spouse will be.

The kind of soul that spends their time playing with your child in the snow.

Giving them everything that a child could ever want.

A father that loves them.

A father that loves spending time with them.

A father that isn’t afraid to get on their hands and knees in the cold just to put a smile on your face.

A father that tosses you in the snow every time you ask him to.

A father who helps you make little snow angels.

To be nineteen,

In a ski lodge,

Hoping that one day,

You marry a man that will make little snow angels.


Scheme A B X X X C X B C X D X X X X E E X A D X X X D
Poetic Form
Metre 10010111110011111101110101 011110111111010110 1110111100110101010 11101011001 11101010110111110011010 11101101100100111111101010 0111011101111010101 011111011010001 0111101111001000101110 111110011101010010011111010010 010011010110 010011110111111001111111 1010101111111111 0111111110111001 101101011101 010111 0101110111 0101101111110100111101111 010110100110011111 010111110110 1111 0011 10111 1100111110110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,633
Words 351
Sentences 21
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

I was inspired to write this poem when I was sitting in a Ski lodge on Mt. Hood in Oregon. I saw a sweet sight of father and child playing in the snow.

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Written on December 10, 2022

Submitted by npjoseph03 on December 10, 2022

Modified on March 08, 2023

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