Analysis of Hold On



Heads spinning, look at all the people. Keep breathing, look at the signs start reading. Is my heart beating fast enough? Pick out colors, name 5 songs, I need air, cant breathe, the migraine starts to weave. People are staring, I must be white as a sheet or red as a beet. Feeling flush and faint. I gotta run, find a way out, didnt I see an exit looking south. Instantly my nails go in my mouth. My eyes are burning starting to sting, vomit threatening to come out. The ground starts to spin, nausea and dizziness come together. I need some relief, I refuse to believe this will last forever.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 110111010110110111011110101111011111110111110110111110111101101011101101111111010110011101111110101110100111011111000100101011101101101111010
Characters 594
Words 111
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 461
Words per line (avg) 111
Letters per stanza (avg) 461
Words per stanza (avg) 111

About this poem

Never been published. An original work. Beginnings of panic/anxiety.

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Written on April 28, 2023

Submitted by WarringtonJ. on May 10, 2023

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