Analysis of Stardance; or, Geminids’ Return



Helios’ chariot scatters stardust,
From Phaethon’s fateful ride,
As Zeus’ bolt sends splinters,
Over the cold December sky.

The fragments ignite like torches,
Etching trails across the sphere,
As Earth twirls blindly through,
The final stardance of the year.


Scheme XXAX ABXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1010011 11101 11111 10010101 01001110 1010101 111101 0101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 265
Words 47
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

This poem draws its inspiration from the awe-inspiring Geminids Meteor Shower that graces our skies every December. The piece aims to evoke the wonder and grandeur of this celestial event, blending the ancient myths of Helios and Zeus and Phaethon with the timeless beauty of the natural world.

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Written on December 13, 2023

Submitted by on December 16, 2023

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Jake Wills

Born in Houston, TX in 1980, Jake Wills spent several years traversing the globe as a soldier. His adventures abroad have now given way to a quieter life in Austin, TX, where he devotes himself to raising his two children. A lifelong practitioner of Meditation, Jake is a IMAA certified Meditation and Mindfulness Teacher, who focuses primarily on veterans suffering from PTS. more…

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