Analysis of Blue Feelings



Her garden was Eden,

while reading elegies all day long.

Her music was songbirds, bluebirds and white doves,

as they played all around her.

The blue-sky lights,

was escorted by gentle breezes from the south,

to northern some where's.

But what she really needed,

was an intoxicating love,

that would move her emotionally, inside and out.

A grasping touch that would open her imaginative

doors to her heart.

Her moods were slow-moving,

as her breathe took a lonely pause

and her feelings was blue and her future of love,

an unfinished race.


Scheme X X X X X X X X A X X X X X A X
Poetic Form
Metre 010110 1101111 010111011 1111010 0111 101011010101 11011 1111010 1101001 111001000101 01011110001000 1101 010110 10110101 001011001011 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 574
Words 128
Sentences 7
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6

About this poem

The poem concerns women that won't give up on love even after surviving an abusive relationship. That real love is not hopeless, and it will find them.

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Written on March 18, 2024

Submitted by Monday13 on March 18, 2024

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Monroe William Fannin, Jr

Monroe William Fannin, Jr, an American songwriter and poet. "Tell Me Something..." have several works that received three Editor's Choice Awards (ILP) for his outstanding achievement in poetry. Several poems have been transformed into loving melodies. more…

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