Analysis of I would rather be your friend



I am green with envy
As a love purse makes my heart heavy.
I love my lips sealed
And not to be lost in the intensity of the split second

Love is the apple of discord
To mystify, daze, confound,
And able to seize the heart
From being the apple of the eye

I won't like us as doves
I would rather see us as thick as thieves
So let's be friends and not lovers
To avoid the future stigmatizing us ex lovers


Scheme AAXX XXXX XXBB
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 101111110 11111 0111100010010110 11010110 110101 0101101 110010101 111111 1110111111 11110110 1010101001110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 406
Words 89
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This poems tries to portray the power of friendship over love

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Written on March 31, 2024

Submitted by yamikani_j on March 31, 2024

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