Analysis of MY OWN HEAVEN
mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)
What makes a crusader a crusader
heroes are not born but made
why did you choose to make me
what parts are you planning to use
build a bomb, light the burning fuse
leave me alone
why make your holy war my fight
I want to be able to rest my tired head at night
Your battle continues, and there is no peace in war nor war in peace. Leave me alone. I don't want to wear that type of scar.
Should I be the voice of the voiceless, the balls of the ballless, the thoughts of the free thinkers, the strength of the cowards?
Why make your hell my own when I am just fine right here on this side of the white line with my little piece of the pie that I call my own heaven
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| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1100100010 1011111 1111111 11111011 10110101 1101 11110111 11111011110111 110010011110111011101111111111 111011010011010110110011010 11111111111111111011111011011111110 |
| Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
| Characters | 666 |
| Words | 144 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 5, 3, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 11 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
| Words per line (avg) | 13 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 103 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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