Analysis of Into Grandpa's Wilderness



Gramps left the town

The folks of years

Made himself the Cabin.

After tenting for

Two spring months.

Befriended the seasons’ rush

The morning sounds

The little projects.

His son, my Papa

Assured me, little Francine

Two wonderful weeks

Best part of all.

And Arrow, his peregrine

Made for rich fun

In the hunt

And tasty rabbit stew.

Twice as delicious

With my Gramps.

Highland winds whining.

Cook fire snapping.


Scheme X A B X X X X X X C X X C B X X X A D D
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1101 0111 101010 10101 111 0100101 0101 01010 11110 0111001 11001 1111 010110 1111 001 010101 11010 111 10110 11010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 470
Words 112
Sentences 10
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 16
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Written on April 25, 2024

Submitted by dougb.72572 on April 25, 2024

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Retired in my 70s. 32 years shipper and safety guy in metal fabrication for roads, bridges structures. Married 49 years to Hilary. Photographer and harmonica busker, both hobbies. Children Lauren and Jordan. more…

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