Analysis of HUman Unkind



Looking out,
the penumbra ellipsical in symmetry.
Breathing in
the impossible dream.
Stars that beckon to my weary soul.

Breaking through,
polar vortexes are seeded by the spin machine.
You say im just
an outdated design,
sentimental at the very core...

Humankind is not so kind.
Humankind is not so kind.
Humankind wont recognize,
that what we seek is what we find....

Phasing in
through a portal of stardust coated finity.
i may drown,
in the oceans of time.
Multi-universal parody.

Breaking out.
Limitations are less with every move i make.
Pain transformed.
Reality shifts, synaptic firing, neural data stored.

Humankind is not so kind.
Humankind could be divine.
But humankind cant recognize,
that humankind is hard to find...


Scheme abcxx xxxdx EEfe caxxb axxx Edfe
Poetic Form
Metre 101 001010100 100 001001 111011101 101 10111010101 1111 11001 01010101 101111 101111 10110 11111111 100 101011101 111 001011 10010100 101 010111100111 101 10111010101 101111 101101 110110 1101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 705
Words 119
Sentences 18
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 5, 4, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by Amarantine on April 28, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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