Analysis of My Redeemer



There were many times I felt so unimportant.
So many times I tried to forget.
The "World" told me I was no one, worthless.
If I had hopes and dreams,I should forget.
Then that day He came into my life.
He showed me that I was important.
He helped me to forgive and forget.
He forgave me and cleansed me from all of my
sins, As I knelt at an altar and wept.
He told me I would be counted worthy,
Because of the blood He had shed.
He told me to share the love I found there,
At that altar where we met.
The Lord said he would never leave me nor
forsake me.
A promise He has always kept.
Now I know that I'm important, For He
supplies my every need.
The VERY ONE who formed the earth,
Is sharing His life with me.


Scheme ABCBDABEFGHIBJGFGKLG
Poetic Form
Metre 101011110010 110111101 0111111110 111101101 111110111 111111010 111101001 10110111111 1111111001 1111111010 01101111 1111101111 1110111 0111110111 011 0101111 1111101011 0111001 01011101 1101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 691
Words 147
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 541
Words per stanza (avg) 146
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Submitted on March 26, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jimmy Savala

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