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Still my heart

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

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I could hardly breath
When I looked for you
But your eye was taken
Was my heart mistaken
I covered my eyes
Touched my chest
My heart pleading rest
Oh please rest
When I saw you gesture to me
Our heads tilted in time
Your hands on mine
Our words flowing
My heart was bleeding
And you saved my life
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Written on February 17, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on February 17, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on February 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCDEEEFGHIIJ
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 297
Words 61
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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Heather Lydia Thornhill

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