You me and our love!
Javid Ahmad Tak 1981 (Srinagar)
You me and our love!
There she was,
In the calmness of the morning,
Yes there she was,
Spreading her presence in ways mesmerising and charming,
As her beauty hung everywhere now,
Here, there, to be everywhere,
I felt a world of beauty it was now,
Where I belonged only with you somewhere,
Now she was in the daylight as well,
The light, the day and she,
Beauty that was covering everything so well,
That I felt the entire universe was nothing, but her deep eyes and she,
And in this interplay of lights and your beauty, I wondered where I was,
Then I discovered that with you I too was everywhere my love,
For now Irma, everything that there was,
It was you, me and our love!
About this poem
This poem leads the reader into the universe of feelings where love exists in everything. Explore the poem and be a part of the universe called "LOVE!"
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Written on July 17, 2023
Submitted by javidaiw99 on July 17, 2023
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Scheme | A BCBCDEDEFGFGBABA |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 676 |
Words | 145 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 16 |
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