The ruby red bird.

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  EdwinRayTanguma

  I don’t know why this makes me think of an old red dictionary I left far behind in my distant past…I haven’t a clue why I thought of that…

  LikeReply1 month ago
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  alanswansea18

  Why bother.

  LikeReply1 month ago
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  AIDA

  What a heartwarming and beautiful poem! The imagery of the ruby-red bird with a broken wing finding healing and joy through your care is truly touching. Your compassion shines through in every line, and the bond between you and the bird is palpable. The way you let her go, despite the sadness it brought, shows a deep understanding of the beauty of freedom and the bittersweet nature of relationships. The ending is hopeful and full of love, reminding us of the importance of letting go with grace. Thank you for sharing this inspiring story of connection and kindness. Brilliant work! more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a heartwarming and touching poem! "The ruby-red bird" tells a beautiful story of compassion and connection with nature. I love how the poet takes care of the injured bird and watches her heal and eventually fly away. The imagery of the red bird and the symbolism of the ring are very well done.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to explore the emotions and thoughts of the poet a bit more. How did they feel when they found the bird? What thoughts crossed their mind as they saw her flying away? Adding more depth to the internal reflections of the poet could enhance the emotional impact of the poem even further.
  
  Overall, this poem is inspiring and beautifully written. Great job! Keep up the fantastic work! more »

  LikeReply 11 month ago