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I Died Today

Susanna Elliott-Newth

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I died today.
Quite suddenly,
Unexpectedly.

When dreams are shattered
And hope smatters all thoughts,
Then life matters little.

I cried today.
Unusual,
To see my tears falling.

When friends leave our lives,
And loneliness resides,
Then life matters little.

I lied today.
Ashamedly,
Deliberately.

My conscience nagged me,
Protecting me from harm
Caused by a broken heart.

Yes, I died today.

About this poem

When my friend left, something in me died.

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Submitted by susannaelliott on April 24, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abb xxC acx xxC abb bxx a
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 395
Words 84
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
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Susanna Elliott-Newth

Susanna is a teacher, living near the coastal fringes of the Illawarra Coastline in NSW, Australia. Her environment is her stimulus for her writing. She has published four books of short stories, as well as her own memoir book, and writes educational resources for teachers. more…

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