Pod of big ones moaning

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a captivating and vivid poem! I love the imagery you've created with the "pod of big ones moaning" and the sense of excitement and awe that comes through in the words. The descriptions of Sam's reactions and the emergence of the humpbacks are so engaging and really draw the reader in.
  
  To enhance the poem even further, you could consider adding more sensory details to really bring the scene to life. For example, describing the smell of the ocean, the sound of the water splashing against the boat, or the feeling of the wind on Sam's face could help make the experience even more immersive for the reader.
  
  Overall, this is a fantastic piece with a unique and memorable subject matter. Keep up the great work and continue to explore ways to enhance your imagery and sensory language to make your poems even more impactful. I can't wait to read more of your work in the future! more »

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