Dawns Song

Numi 1967 (USA)



Bear your heart no consequence as it selfishly seeks its twin. No meritorious deed can secure, nor my affections win the tangible part you seek. This heart will be severed before one can endeavor to break the skin, beneath a cage of bone there is no home where logic states it should have been.

To touch me deeply as you desire, look not past thine two eyes. Midnight too holds her secrets from days lite, a promise kept not without a fight, even her best intentions shattered by lightning’s first cohesive strike.

Look not through me, like she. Close your eyes and make a list of all the mysteries in me you wish to see. What you deem UN-navigable is not certainly.

An ice blue gate to an emotional abyss, can be opened at your command. The key is the power contained in a long gentle kiss...
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Written on November 05, 1999

Submitted by Numi on May 21, 2024

Modified by Numi on May 21, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X X
Characters 798
Words 153
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1

Numi

"Numi" is the pen-name I adopted in 2007 after a friend gifted me a copy of The Essential Rumi; by Coleman Barks. After reading some of my works, it was suggested that it reminded them of the works by Rumi. In no way do I align myself with this Great Master Poet, but I do feel a deep connection to his poetry, and the book of Essentials was my constant companion during a 5 year saga, where I was stranded in the Amazon Jungle of Peru, from 2010-2015. Everything in my collections were written during a 4 year period, 1999-2003. more…

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